四級英語模擬作文
英語四級模擬作文
例一：
Part Ⅰ Writing Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay
entitled Malting Friends Online. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1.網上交友現象越來截止普遍。 2.這種做法有利有弊。 3.我的建議。
答案:[高分作文]
With a wide variety of virtual communication tools springing up like mushrooms, making friends online has become increasingly fashionable over the past decade.
This channel of communication enables people to get acquainted with cyber friends from anywhere without any limitations, enriching their life experiences and even extending their knowledge. What's more, it is not rare for some to find their bosom friends and even Mr. /Mrs. Right. But as a double-edged sword, making friends without physically meeting each other undoubtedly has evils--tragedies occur when cyber-friends finally decide to date. Not coming singly but in pairs, some spouses get divorced because one party falls in love with cyber-lovers.
The network renders people convenient and efficient means to get in touch with the rest of the world and we should make good use of it instead of falling victims to it. [評析]
這是一篇以分析某現象的利弊為主的說明文。
第一段用一句話說明了隨著各種各樣的(a wide variety of)虛擬通訊工具如雨後春筍般湧現(springing up like mushrooms)，網上交友在過去十年裡(over the past decade)變得越來越(increasingly)流行。with引導的名詞+doing結構是表示原因的經典用法。 第二段用What's more連線了兩個好處。其中的亮點詞彙有：enable people to get acquainted with“使人們結識”;enriching experiences“豐富經驗”和extending knowledge“拓寬知識面”兩個短語用了現在分詞作伴隨狀語;it is not rare表示“並不罕見”，比it is common更有力;bosom friends“知心朋友”;Mr./Mrs. Right“另一半;心上人”。 第三段話鋒一轉，利用比喻“就像一把雙刃劍(as a double-edged sword)”，引出了壞處。成語Not coming singly but in pairs“無獨有偶”的前後講了兩個壞處，恰恰與前一段的兩個好處形成對比。 最後一段簡潔地發出呼籲：網路給我們提供了便利、高效的接觸外界的手段，我們應該好好利用它，而不應該成為其受害者。亮點詞彙有：render, convenient and efficient means, fall victim to
例二：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay
entitled On Conserving Energy. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1.能源短缺問題已經非常嚴重;
2.可以採取節能措解決能源短缺問題; 3.你的看法。 答案:[高分作文]
Nowadays there is growing concern on the serious problem of energy shortage. Many people worry that energy resources on the earth will be exhausted if we use them in an unchecked way. And they believe that the energy shortage will cause serious problems and even crisis. Conserving energy is one of the measures which have been taken to solve the problem of energy shortage. For example, some countries have a daylight saving system to use less electricity for lighting. Also, some cities have enforced some facilities for saving water at public places such as rest rooms and bars. Still more, some have enforced serious penalties on overuse of electricity, water, and farming land. By these means, people hope the drain on energy resources could be slowed down. In a word, it is high time that serious consideration was given to conserving energy. Only through immediate and effective action, can we human beings survive and enjoy life as desired. [評析]
節能是當前備受關注的一個話題，因此可說的內容很多，緊緊圍繞提綱要求進行闡述是本文的鮮明特點。文章首段直截了當地提出能源短缺這樣一個話題，中間段概括說明節能是解決能源短缺問題的重要措施之一，運用並列型擴充套件法介紹了幾種節能措施。末尾段重申主題，再次強調問題的緊迫性和嚴重性。 本文詞語和句型運用自如。如第二段的列舉法雖然沒有使用first，second等詞語，但使用了Also，still more，使整個段落看起來內容充實，條理清楚。結尾段使用了此類分析問題的作文的典型結尾句型“it is high time that”。
例三：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay
entitled On English Learning. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1.你認為在英語學習過程中存在的.主要問題是什麼? 2.導致這些問題的原因有哪些? 3.對於解決這些問題，你有何建議?
It is obvious that there are some problems in college English
learning. In my opinion, something most discouraging is that many
students find difficulty in communicating with a native speaker although they have learned English for many years.
There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon. Firstly, most of the students, even many teachers of English pay little attention to the use of the language. To them, the most important thing of learning English is to memorize some grammatical rules and enlarge the vocabulary. Secondly, many students have not realized the real purpose of learning English. They hold that they study English to pass tests, not to master a useful tool for their own use.
To change this situation, my suggestion is that more emphasis be put on improving communicative abilities in English. For example, why not advocate that the listening and speaking should be included in the test of English at various levels? [評析]
作文首先直接提出英語學習中存在的問題，即經過多年英語學習之後，學生依然不能用英語進行交流。第二段揭示並分析產生這種現象的兩個原因。主題句為：There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon.擴充套件句的主要內容：一是對語言運用的學習不夠重視;二是學習英語的目的只是為了透過考試。最後提出解決問題而且現實可行的建議，用問句結尾，引起閱卷老師對本文的注意。 本文的語言表達準確，三個段落的過渡自然。文章開頭句子明確提出問題It is obvious that there are some problems in college English learning，第二段首句提出產生這種現象的原因有兩個There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon，末段的首句用To change this situation來承接上文，最後用for example引出自己的建議。
例四：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay
entitled Cheating on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1.在大學裡存在著考試作弊的現象; 2.你是怎麼看待這一現象的; 3.如何才能制止這種現象。 答案:[高分作文]
Cheating on exams is becoming a serious problem on campus. 23% of students have ever been found doing so on their exams. Some of them copy from each other, some take out their textbooks or reference books to copy, still some use the modern communication tools such as mobile phone as a way to get related information. It is obvious that cheating on exams has bad effect on students' academic performances as well as morality practice. Many remarkable factors contribute to the cheating in exams. First,some students just play time away and want to pass the exam without efforts. And some students are under great pressure from parents and they fear to fail the exams. Second, college or universities must bear the blame for their placing more emphasis on grades than learning. Rigid grading system promotes cheating.
How can such an unhealthy phenomenon be eliminated? In my opinion, there are two ways we can adopt. First of all, a severe punishment should be put into effect to prevent students from cheating. In addition, we shouldre form our examination system to make it a real effective tool to measure students' abilities.
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