2015年6月英語四級作文
版本一
命題解析
本題要求首先描述圖畫，然後評論家長在其孩子成長中的作用。圖中顯示：一位女兒興高采烈地告訴母親：“媽媽，好訊息!我被您選擇的大學錄取了。”顯而易見，本題的主旨是：父母為子女做出了太多的決定，造成子女缺乏獨立。
關於兩代關係這一話題，國內寫作考試已經多次考察。2003年考研(課程)寫作考察圖畫作文“溫室花朵經不起風雨”，即父母溺愛造成子女缺乏獨立。2010年12月，四級寫作考察“父母如何讓孩子獨立”。如果之前研究過以上真題，本題易如反掌。
寫作思路：
1、本文首段應簡要描述圖畫，指出有些父母過於包辦造成子女缺乏獨立。
2、次段寫法比較靈活，可以具體分析父母過於包辦的原因，也可以進行舉例論證。
3、尾段最好提出建議措施，呼籲父母放手給孩子自由，而子女應努力尋求獨立。
參考範文：
The drawing vividly reflects a daughter is chatting with her mother in their house. The eyes sparkling with delight, the daughter tells her mother, “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice.” Obviously, the implication of the portrayal is that the daughter is lack of independence due to her mother’s doting care.
The lovely daughter is naturally associated with the only children in our current society; the college of the mother’s choice epitomizes parents’ doting care and abundant material supplies that can shield the children from the harsh reality. Once the young people begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.
Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from the thought-provoking drawing. On the one hand, we can frequently use it to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems.
版本二
命題解析
本題要求首先簡要描述圖畫，然後評論這個孩子對上學的理解。圖畫顯示：一個小孩問母親：如果我的手機已經知道一切，為什麼我還要上學呢?顯而易見，本題主旨為手機是否可以取代上學。
國內寫作考試中已經反覆考察手機這一熱點話題。2009年MBA寫作考察“手機簡訊”，2010年考研英語(二)寫作考察“手機入網”，2013年12月四級寫作考察“手機在人們生活中越來越多的使用”，也考查了“網路對學習的影響，以及教育是否僅僅是獲得資訊”。2014年12月，考研英語(一)寫作再次考察“手機時代的‘聚會’”。如果考生研究過之前的寫作真題，諸多表達均可使用。本題尤其和13年12月四級寫作考察的“網路對學習的影響”異曲同工，幾乎就是原題重考。
寫作思路：
1、本題首段應簡要描述圖畫，指出當代有些年輕人認為手機可以取代上學。
2、次段最好進行正反論證，說明手機雖然可以幫助獲得大量資訊，但無法取代教育，教育絕非僅僅是獲取資訊。
3、第三段最好提出建議措施：我們應該合理使用手機，同時學校教育必不可少、不可或缺。
參考範文：
It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is talking with his mother in their house. The boy asks confusingly, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”
We often hear of successful people who are largely “self-taught”. I say largely because, in all cases, they have received some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a classroom, or from parents or a relative at home. In my case, I am glad I always learned from teachers, from fist grade all the way through my Master’s degree. A good teacher adds considerably to the materials contained in the textbooks.
In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no guidance or instruction from a teacher. A skilled and talented teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned. I believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree.
版本三
命題解析
本題要求首先簡要描述圖畫，然後評論這種現代生活。圖畫顯示：現代人無論工作、居家、娛樂還是睡眠，都與電腦密不可分。顯而易見，本題主旨為電腦或網路對現代生活的影響。
國內寫作考試中已經反覆考察電腦或網路這一熱點話題。2002年6月四級寫作考察“大學生使用電腦情況”，2009年考研寫作考察“網路的‘近’與‘遠’”，2012年6月六級寫作考察“網路對人際共同的.影響”，2013年12月四級寫作考察“網路對人們溝通方式的影響”。2015年6月，四級寫作再次考察電腦或網路這一話題。如果考生研究過之前的寫作真題，諸多表達均可使用。
寫作思路：
1、本題首段應簡要描述圖畫，指出人們無論工作、家庭、休閒或休息，都與電腦關係密切。
2、次段最好進行正反論證，說明電腦有利有弊：一方面可以滿足工作生活的需要並娛樂自我，另一方面過度沉迷也會浪費大量的時間和精力。
3、第三段最好提出建議措施：我們應該揚長避短，在合理使用電腦的同時，避免過度沉迷。
參考範文：
As is symbolically illustrate in the cartoon, a person is always staying in front of a computer no matter whether he or she is working, studying or playing. Even when he is sleeping, the image of surfing on line is also indispensable in his sweet dreams.
The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and computer. On the one hand, there is no denying that the computer is currently one of the most efficient tools either to entertain oneself or to meet the work's needs. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to computers to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life.
Hence, it is necessary for us to use computers in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, the computer is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach.
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